Re: New song - feedback wanted

Date: 1 Jun 2003 16:42:04 -0700
Newsgroups: rec.music.makers.songwriting
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"Linda Y" <email-address-deleted> wrote in message news:<gIrCa.9652$KF1.140999@amstwist00>...
> It's funny how you can write a song and think it's your best work ever and
> then the next day go - uh, what was I thinking? I thought this one was great
> when I had just finished it, but now I'm not so sure. What do you guys
> think? I don't expect the same kind of feedback that I got on my last song,
> so don't be afraid to be honest! ;-)
>
> At least this time I managed to get both the link and the lyrics included in
> the first post in this thread... :-P
Hi there Leah! I just listened to your latest one three times to see
how catchy it is. For me, it don't do it as well for me as the last
one - which I too think should be called Drive Me Crazy. That one has
been running round my head for the last couple of days, that's the one
I would get going on with the full production. That chorus is one
helluva hook, kid!
Little point on the English side, if you are bothered -
> I've stopped to trust
would be said "I've stopped trusting" Hope you dont mind the
correction. Leave it as it is, it sounds cute what do I know!
I don't think the new song will be as memorable in a few days, for me.
I think you feel that too. Keep em comin!
Dave
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