Re: Miles to Go

Date: Wed, 4 Jun 2003 19:53:07 +0200
Newsgroups: rec.music.makers.songwriting
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"Lyle Adams" <email-address-deleted> skrev i melding
news:GapDa.15032$email-address-deleted...
> This is from the guy who made the first bad post, Kyle.
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> As a type of marketing ploy, "Constructive Criticism" as you put it,
> sometime draws more attention then the "Nice" Stuff. I hope it got more
> people to go to your site and hear your song, then might have otherwise.
> After a second hearing of your song, the melody is catchy. I do not
> particulary agree with the choice of words, however, the imagery leads
into
> exactly what you are trying to achieve. Another thing is, I can actually
> relate to this song, which may have drawn my immediate emotional response.
> Some of the songs I have posted need music - would you be game to try your
> hand?
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> Kyle
Hi, I might be able to do something, I think the music part (whether good or
bad is obvoiusly subjective) has always been the easy part and lyric writing
is something I am working actively on to do better but I find it really
difficult. Music isn't work..it's play, but lyric writing...that doesn't
come as easily. So yeah, I could give it a try. I don't know how I would do with someone
elses lyrics, but if you would like to try, send me some to email-address-deleted
and I can see if they are something I can work with. Up front, if it turns out it isn't, it is no reflection on your lyric
writing, or conversely if I can come up with something for some lyrics I
won't get my feelings hurt if it turns out it wasn't what you wanted. But hey..if you feel up for it, send me some!
Regards,
Jim
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